Posted: 2009-09-30 21:11
the strawberryfield is a secret dude
yoyoyo today divetime. *drum roll*
booky-booklet. this 1 looks much more like "hey im an artist" now. busy business.
cool place even without colors. trees in the water lol they never run dry. i wanna go there!!!
song1 I.D.: nice words. what is an ID? your past? something you have done that is written on paper? how you think of yourself or how others think of you? a bit of everything probably. i dont think ppl are all the same but thats not necessarily bad. i dont like ID-tags thats why i playd dead too. sound is nice and turns out even better from 2:40 when the rhythm changes. grade 2
song2 hashiru: hmm yea many lovesongs lol many relationship-songs. but it sounds really good and i saw maaya for the first time in the video hashiru and i was like WHOA. evry song performed in we are kazeyomi got a bonus too. grade 2+
song3 babyface: a cheer up song in a casual way. when i would write a cheer up song i think my song would be a bit more serious.
i wouldnt just give advise but also try to understand the "baby face". i dont say they way in the song is wrong im just a little bit too much of a pessimistic person. grade 3
song4 getsuyou no asa: shes really good at understanding the lyrics not written from her. feels exhausted. sound fits good. hmm whats this raw wet odor on the umbrealla lol frecklegirl. grade 3
song5 pilot: reminds me a bit of pocket o kara ni shite. donut= doonatsu lol thats so cute. which rules does she mean...
sound fits again to the lyrics. grade 2-
song6 heavenly blue: aaa when some1 else wrote the song i have problems judging from time to time depending on what is said. "leave me alone already" ouch that hurts. sound sounds like a planned freestylesession. okay i really need more flow. grade 4+
song7 peace: wow thats a little bit evil for me haha. im just sensitive like a sensor but surrounded by fog. why do i feel recklessness aaa. because its also inside me. the more i listen to the song the more i like it/understand it. grade 3
song8 yucca: nice song and nice writings by yūho iwasato. bit like me just in an optimistic way. grade 2+
song9 neko to inu: that song sounded closer than a close friend lol. flirtstyle :-O. interesting i get curious. its so clear, honest and feminine. nice piano club atmosphere. grade 2+
song10 kodoku: good lyrics again by yūho iwasato. yea i understand now why maaya chosed her back then. i can answer her question why ppl need to be loved back when they love to find happiness. because a duracell-bunny needs energy. dont worry i dont expect anything. slightly dramatic sound (not ment as critique). lol i never thought of this song as a 1grader until today with my test o.O. grade 1-
song11 dive: isolated oceanstyle. damn the ocean is a whole world still unsolved. im definilty searching for atlantis. versus-mode till it broke my diaphragm-code - transient shadow. grade 1-
yoyoyo today divetime. *drum roll*
booky-booklet. this 1 looks much more like "hey im an artist" now. busy business.
cool place even without colors. trees in the water lol they never run dry. i wanna go there!!!
song1 I.D.: nice words. what is an ID? your past? something you have done that is written on paper? how you think of yourself or how others think of you? a bit of everything probably. i dont think ppl are all the same but thats not necessarily bad. i dont like ID-tags thats why i playd dead too. sound is nice and turns out even better from 2:40 when the rhythm changes. grade 2
song2 hashiru: hmm yea many lovesongs lol many relationship-songs. but it sounds really good and i saw maaya for the first time in the video hashiru and i was like WHOA. evry song performed in we are kazeyomi got a bonus too. grade 2+
song3 babyface: a cheer up song in a casual way. when i would write a cheer up song i think my song would be a bit more serious.
i wouldnt just give advise but also try to understand the "baby face". i dont say they way in the song is wrong im just a little bit too much of a pessimistic person. grade 3
song4 getsuyou no asa: shes really good at understanding the lyrics not written from her. feels exhausted. sound fits good. hmm whats this raw wet odor on the umbrealla lol frecklegirl. grade 3
song5 pilot: reminds me a bit of pocket o kara ni shite. donut= doonatsu lol thats so cute. which rules does she mean...
sound fits again to the lyrics. grade 2-
song6 heavenly blue: aaa when some1 else wrote the song i have problems judging from time to time depending on what is said. "leave me alone already" ouch that hurts. sound sounds like a planned freestylesession. okay i really need more flow. grade 4+
song7 peace: wow thats a little bit evil for me haha. im just sensitive like a sensor but surrounded by fog. why do i feel recklessness aaa. because its also inside me. the more i listen to the song the more i like it/understand it. grade 3
song8 yucca: nice song and nice writings by yūho iwasato. bit like me just in an optimistic way. grade 2+
song9 neko to inu: that song sounded closer than a close friend lol. flirtstyle :-O. interesting i get curious. its so clear, honest and feminine. nice piano club atmosphere. grade 2+
song10 kodoku: good lyrics again by yūho iwasato. yea i understand now why maaya chosed her back then. i can answer her question why ppl need to be loved back when they love to find happiness. because a duracell-bunny needs energy. dont worry i dont expect anything. slightly dramatic sound (not ment as critique). lol i never thought of this song as a 1grader until today with my test o.O. grade 1-
song11 dive: isolated oceanstyle. damn the ocean is a whole world still unsolved. im definilty searching for atlantis. versus-mode till it broke my diaphragm-code - transient shadow. grade 1-